ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Literature Text
I know that you aren't listening,
but I thought that I would write
for you, a sappy love poem...
...again.
You probably won't see this,
but I don't want you to.
You'll frighten and you'll flee...
...Gone.
Silent screams are echoing,
through foreign halls comprised
of dozens of perfect strangers...
...Not you.
I do have valid reason,
reason you don't read.
You already know everything...
...everything.
Not a word left to whisper;
whisper in your ear.
Ink in the wells of hearts...
...spilled.
The ground is trembling;
trembling at your feet.
Let me hold the earth still...
...don't fall.
But do, if you please;
please fall to pieces,
pieces of hazardous jigsaws...
...no.
It isn't so simple;
simplistic wasn't a choice.
And never shall it ever be...
...never.
but I thought that I would write
for you, a sappy love poem...
...again.
You probably won't see this,
but I don't want you to.
You'll frighten and you'll flee...
...Gone.
Silent screams are echoing,
through foreign halls comprised
of dozens of perfect strangers...
...Not you.
I do have valid reason,
reason you don't read.
You already know everything...
...everything.
Not a word left to whisper;
whisper in your ear.
Ink in the wells of hearts...
...spilled.
The ground is trembling;
trembling at your feet.
Let me hold the earth still...
...don't fall.
But do, if you please;
please fall to pieces,
pieces of hazardous jigsaws...
...no.
It isn't so simple;
simplistic wasn't a choice.
And never shall it ever be...
...never.
I have no actual commentary.
© 2012 - 2024 iChrno
Comments20
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactThis isa amazing. Though, I felt as though I was sort of lost and confused. This is a striking poem. Yet, it seems to not have thought which is a good thing. It is simple and chic and original and just mind-blowing. I love how you used metahpors and similes. Keep doing what you're doing and you will have -beautiful, striking, and amazing peices of artwork and literature. I really enjoyed how you used the puzzle peices and how it shows how you are so dedicated onto this one person/thing. I almost seems as though you want to save them but at the same time you just want to let them go.